Well this is bad, very bad. Um She just got 'rescued' by a killer. NOT GOOD and it wasn't even a real rescue. It was a set up. That shit is scary that he googled her and found her that easily. Damn.
She should have logged on, by not being there when he needed her she has gotten into a bad situation. :(
Yep! This man is dangerous and determined - very bad combination! He had to meet her but he didn't want to come off as sleazy so there had to be an explanation...what happens when she learns who he is though? She should have had a better cover story but in my mind she got too comfortable seeing how he called her every single night.
It was her night off and she just wanted to do something to relax. But that did seem to set off the chain of events that will change her life forever. Very bad things happen when a psycho is fixated on you :(
Short story, I think 4-5 segments should be all. Thank you :D He is a little out there and the object of his affection has no idea what she's getting herself into...
Hahaha well according to Mica, Seth's dad was a rolling stone; anything's possible.
Marco, he's a smooth operator for sure and Rory is caught up now. Some dark, alluring stranger saves her life and then offers to get her out of there; how could she resist?
I understand completely. Marco isn't hard on the eyes and it's easy to imagine him tying you up in his basement of tricks for a little fun. But then it might not end so well...that's the bad part. But now that he has her, things may just be a little more interesting.
What a creep! He paid the blonde to let him 'rescue' her? Oh no :( He watched too many 'let's operate without anesthesia' movies growing up, didn't he? He is one nasty sicko! I hope she turns this around and he is locked in that cage.
The length he'll go to get what he wants is frightening. Haha Marco's a predator who probably spent his life watching all kinds of horrific acts to perfect his methods! Rory's only hope is that she's able to see him for what he is before it's too late!
Oh wow! I was drooling in the beginning and now I'm a little creeped out.
ReplyDeleteStill sexy though. Just saying.
LOL! Yeah he went through a lot of trouble to have the woman of his dreams and now that he's taking her back to his place...all bets are off!
DeleteThank you :) his dark, latin flavor thing is very alluring!
Well this is bad, very bad. Um She just got 'rescued' by a killer. NOT GOOD and it wasn't even a real rescue. It was a set up. That shit is scary that he googled her and found her that easily. Damn.
ReplyDeleteShe should have logged on, by not being there when he needed her she has gotten into a bad situation. :(
Yep! This man is dangerous and determined - very bad combination! He had to meet her but he didn't want to come off as sleazy so there had to be an explanation...what happens when she learns who he is though? She should have had a better cover story but in my mind she got too comfortable seeing how he called her every single night.
DeleteIt was her night off and she just wanted to do something to relax. But that did seem to set off the chain of events that will change her life forever. Very bad things happen when a psycho is fixated on you :(
So far, this series/short story? has perfectly depicted that of a hunter, so chilling! Brilliant work~ c:
ReplyDeleteShort story, I think 4-5 segments should be all. Thank you :D He is a little out there and the object of his affection has no idea what she's getting herself into...
DeleteI told you Seth had a brother, why doesn't anyone believe the things I say!
ReplyDeleteHe looked her up, staged that fight, made her trust him -ish, and now she's leaving with him...
This guy is giving me seriously mixed feelings. Some of them desired, others not so much!
Did I mention I'm intrigued??
Hahaha well according to Mica, Seth's dad was a rolling stone; anything's possible.
DeleteMarco, he's a smooth operator for sure and Rory is caught up now. Some dark, alluring stranger saves her life and then offers to get her out of there; how could she resist?
I understand completely. Marco isn't hard on the eyes and it's easy to imagine him tying you up in his basement of tricks for a little fun. But then it might not end so well...that's the bad part. But now that he has her, things may just be a little more interesting.
Intrigue is great :D
What a creep! He paid the blonde to let him 'rescue' her? Oh no :(
ReplyDeleteHe watched too many 'let's operate without anesthesia' movies growing up, didn't he? He is one nasty sicko! I hope she turns this around and he is locked in that cage.
The length he'll go to get what he wants is frightening. Haha Marco's a predator who probably spent his life watching all kinds of horrific acts to perfect his methods! Rory's only hope is that she's able to see him for what he is before it's too late!
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