Monday, October 24, 2011

24: Asylum



Blood stained floors are all that remain
of the building and people labeled insane
their cries for help went unanswered in the night
their family and friends were hidden from sight

The doctor would place them up on the rack
tortured and tested on they couldn’t fight back
the people that were here were never the same
and they all have the same illness to blame





He used them to test his new techniques
turning them all into disfigured freaks
but the night came when the patients were done
it was time for them all to have a little fun




The riot was quick but for the doctor it was slow
he felt every cut, every stab, every severed toe
they laughed as they prodded the sick old man
and once they were done they took the keys and ran



The escapees hid in the woods behind back
hidden from view but prepared to attack
but now they must find a new place to go
To the doctors’ home perhaps? Soon we’ll know.



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8 comments:

  1. ~ Watch out they are on the loose!
    ~ Loved it!(",)

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  2. This is connected to what was read earlier in the secret room :)

    Thank you for reading!

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  3. EEK....all these creatures headed towards the house. I hope DJ has enough weapons because this is going to turn into a monster take over real fast!!!

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  4. That's all the girls need now! The ghosts of insane patients. I wonder if they are also contributing to the hallucinations. Maybe they are getting revenge for what was done to them!

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  5. Jaz:

    They're going to need an arsenal! And even that might not be enough! All these monsters converge on this place every year and this is the real reason Everett has stuck around.

    Thank you for reading :)

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  6. El:

    Those patients are looking for a bit of payback and unfortunately for the girls that means whomever they find at the doctors' residence! They are most definitely looking for revenge (and may mistakenly think the girls are family!)

    Thank you for reading!

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  7. I think the worse thing I could have done was read these comments. That was the worse part! The girls need to get out! NOW!!

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  8. Qui:

    HAHA Why the comments? Weirdo :P They should (laughing as I type, your comment was funny). But yes, they need to make preparations to get out now!

    Thank you for reading!

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